Testament



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Testament
Sparkleafexc February 23, 2015 at 7:20pm
© Sparkleaf 2015-2018
This is my first original work! It started as my NaNoWriMo story for 2013, under the title Rivana's Hope, but I never got it beyond chapter 4. I've been trying to resume work on it ever since.

Since I'm in a creative writing class this semester, I decided to make another attempt at this story. Sadly, I don't expect much favorable feedback because I didn't give it the full "Final Fifteen Minutes" treatment that tends to give my writings the polish that people like. Among other things, I didn't mention cannors are bipedal in the draft that I submitted to the class.

As I noted in Stream, there are a number of differences between this draft of Testament and the original Rivana's Hope, including how the Cryling works and the characters' personalities. Most of the changes were made to appease my creative writing class, but... ahaha... that was probably in vain. (I don't regret the title change though, I always wanted to give it a better title)

Anyway, hope you guys enjoy. \ouo/
Testament, characters, concepts, world (c) Steven Loon

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Arkangelcool
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February 24, 2015 at 8:10am
You have rekindled my spark for writing and for that I am in your debt.
AaronGray
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February 23, 2015 at 11:45pm
Good story spark! I hope my love of "dragon riding" or "dragon riders" won't keep me away from this... I don't hate dragon slaying and slayers, I just don't like the thought of it. Like Pillow, I would also love to know more about the world and how the entire story will go and will end. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapters or chapter. Byez!
thekingofpillowland
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February 23, 2015 at 8:26pm
Sounds fun. I'll definitely keep reading. The magic sounds interesting (and so do the dragon wars!) Plus I would love to find out more about this world.
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Submitted Feb 23, 2015
Last Edited Mar 8, 2015
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