Calling All Retrievers! -perfect storm-



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Calling All Retrievers! -perfect storm-
Sparkleafexc September 29, 2015 at 12:29am
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YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW LONG I'VE WAITED TO USE THIS THUMBNAIL

Anyway, this story was a beast to cover. At some point while making an outline, a sudden thought occured to me. What if I just wrote it in the style of a script. This was the end result. None of it was hard to write except for the very end.

Here is the original for comparison. As you can see, I tried to keep true to the original flow of events, even if the characters' roles changed. At the same time, I tried to

This is a story about Sparktail and Thalia and what sort of crazy stuff they go through back when they were on an explorer team. I've tried to expand from the flashbacks in A Retriever in Exile for some semblance of continuity. At the same time, I want to offer different portrayals of Sparktail and Thalia, children who can plausibly develop into their roles in LotE.

I didn't think I would be able to post the story properly because it was formatted on a word doacumenta but I seem to have managed somehow. @_@

Requesting feedback! I always love comments, but I especially want to hear about this one. Is it still enjoyable in this format? Does the story match up with the other stories? Who's your favorite? That sort of thing

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Submitted Sep 29, 2015
Last Edited Mar 13, 2017
Size 105 KiB
Characters 107289
Words 16402
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