The Tower and the Eye



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The Tower and the Eye
Thane December 27, 2016 at 1:16pm
© Thane 2016-2018
Some work I did for a creative writing class this past semester. Imagery inspired by an RPG session I played in.

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twiggycool
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December 27, 2016 at 4:02pm
really liked the connection between her breath described as wind and then protests described as stinging and salty - two adjectives I typically associate with an ocean breeze. I really like the mood of it all around, I think you captured the rpg feel along with a more melancholy tone!
Thane
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December 29, 2016 at 9:29am
hehe, I love it when people find good things about my writing that I didn't even consciously plan. Thanks so much for reading this, twiggy! :)
twiggycool
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December 29, 2016 at 10:58am
my pleasure!!!
thekingofpillowland
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December 27, 2016 at 2:49pm
Neato, man.
Thane
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December 29, 2016 at 9:28am
tanks. :)
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