twiggycool February 26, 2019 at 7:00pm
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hello my friends! I present to you the first story I submitted for my english class, which is focused on reading & writing short stories. I love this class so much!!! this piece is being discussed by the class next tuesday, so I'm super stressed about that but I really want it to go well..!!! :"0
both of my proofreaders commented that they pictured the museum as being in a city, which surprised me! so, I'm curious to hear what you guys envisioned.


February 27, 2019 at 6:35pm
This was such a joy to read! I love that the main character kept noticing different details about the painting the more she visited it. For some reason, the idea of always taking a map even though you know the place by heart really resonated with me too. Maybe it's the feeling of showing your appreciation to the people who work at the desk.
My brain wasn't very creative with picturing the museum; it was basically the Dali Museum in St. Pete, Florida for me haha. But in my mind, the museum in your story had a larger garden around it than the Dali Museum does!
February 28, 2019 at 3:06pm
I'm so glad..!!!! I just looked up the Dali Museum and that is such a cool building omg! thank you for sharing :"D
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Submitted Feb 26, 2019
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