Legend of the Exile, Chapter 12



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Legend of the Exile, Chapter 12
Sparkleafexc June 18, 2010 at 1:47pm
© Sparkleaf 2010-2021
Chapter 12 of Legend of the Exile, enjoy!

Ignore Xetaja's comment, this used to be chapters 16-20, and that comment is about chapter 19.

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| Skip: LotE Part 1 |
| Skip: LotE Part 2 |
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| Back: Chapter 11 |
| LotE: Chapter 12 |
| Next: Chapter 13 |
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| Skip: LotE Part 3 |
| Skip: LotE Part 4 |
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It's important that everyone understands the plan. Even if the plan is so needlessly complicated and cluttered with context that no one understands the plan.

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Xetajaadm
Heart 
March 20, 2011 at 2:25pm
Since you fled from the chat, I'll be putting whatever I find here! For example...

"Pests, all of you, stan" <- Mewtwo and his unfinished sentence. Quite frightening. Separately, when he tells Sparktail that he hates him, I had to lol. XD The image of a whiny little sore loser appeared in my head.

"Blinking, the weary Raichu forced his gazed towards his rescuer"

Other than that, I love how the battle between Mewtwo and Sparktail became a lot closer than before. :U Sparktail seems just as conflicted as ever, but thank goodness that doesn't end up getting him killed. As per usual, written so well I want to slap you. JK
Sparkleafexc
Heart 
March 20, 2011 at 2:32pm
Whoops, fixed those typos xDD
Hehe, well, he did get his skin practically ripped off by that Volt Tackle xD I actually was going to have Mewtwo beat the crap out of Sparktail before Thalia rescued him, but decided it was unnecessary. But yeah, I really tried to make Sparktail a more interesting character to read about. Anyhow, thanks for reading~ :D
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