Legend of the Exile, Chapter 14



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Legend of the Exile, Chapter 14
Sparkleafexc June 20, 2010 at 12:04pm
© Sparkleaf 2010-2021
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| Skip: LotE Part 1 |
| Skip: LotE Part 2 |
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| LotE: Chapter 13 |
| LotE: Chapter 14 |
| LotE: Chapter 15 |
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| Skip: LotE Part 3 |
| Skip: LotE Part 4 |
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So back in 2011, I did a big rewrite of this chapter and made Sparktail all whiny and emo (as in, *unnecessarily* depressing). It was really stupid and made the chapter horrendously long.

This chapter has gone through a lot of changes since then, but I think it's truer to the original ideas now.

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Sparkleafexc
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February 9, 2014 at 12:31pm
Note: Due to the original 4-chapter submissions, this was actually not an LotE submission back then.
SkyWarriorcoord
Heart 
June 20, 2010 at 12:24pm
Wait... he lost his tail? D8 I must have been reading fast... crap. Anyways, I do enjoy reading this can you continue? :3
Sparkleafexc
Heart 
June 20, 2010 at 12:26pm
Oh, no, you didn't miss anything, it was an idea I worked in afterwards. Sorry to confuse you!
Yep, I'll make sure to continue :D
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