Legend of the Exile, Chapter 16



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Legend of the Exile, Chapter 16
Sparkleafexc June 21, 2010 at 5:50pm
© Sparkleaf 2010-2021
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Rewriting this one was fun. See, I originally used the Sapphire Cave of Origin as Kyogre's lair, completely forgetting that I'd already used the Emerald Cave of Origin in chapter 2.
For the most part, all the lines and flow of action are the same.

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Originally, LotE was posted in increments of 4 chapters each. As a result, this submission slot originally had chapter 23, the chapter that really caught the public's attention for the first time, way back in 2010. So ignore the comments because they may have spoilers!

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Popecool
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July 27, 2010 at 9:09pm
Embyr... what a... you know what, maybe I'd better not say what I think of her. |D
Sparkleafexc
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July 27, 2010 at 9:35pm
mmmyeah
Lucecool
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June 23, 2010 at 2:15pm
Oh my word. I MUST NOW GO READ ALL THE OTHER CHAPTERS! *runs off*
SkyWarriorcoord
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June 21, 2010 at 7:29pm
No :'C COME BACK EMBYR
I love this chapter :c
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