Legend of the Exile, Chapter 21



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Legend of the Exile, Chapter 21
Sparkleafexc July 22, 2010 at 1:12pm
© Sparkleaf 2010-2021
These are the last chapters of Legend of the Exile. Thank you all for reading, really... :'D It's been a really great time to write this, and it wouldn't be anything if I never had a single reader. Thanks to Twill, Sky, and Frosti for giving me advice and helping me finish this story once and for all.

*does an epic Leafeon whistle* I've loved writing this, and I hope you enjoyed reading it. But this is only the beginning. There are still more stories to write, more roleplays to post in, and more chores and/or homework to dodge. So keep an eye out for new stories!

~Sparkleaf
*climbs onto a Skarmory and flies out the window*


Okay, so back in 2010, the story was posted in these galleries in increments of 4 chapters. This submission was where I posted the original ending chapters of LotE, in which Sparktail kills Giratina and saves the world (which can still be found in the forums somewhere). See the original posting date on this submission? That's when the story was supposed to end.

But I didn't really like the ending, so about a year later, I started writing LotE again. I started by rewriting the very same four chapters that were in this submission, originally intending to take the fight straight back to Sinnoh. After some thought, though, I realized that an important phase in Sparktail's life hadn't been dealt with-- because he settles down in Hoenn aftewards, and there hadn't been any explanation why, so I ended up doing Volume IV. And now Volume V will be a completely different story, so now I wonder why I didn't just let it be a completely new story from the start.

This submission originally had the ending of Volume III. However, I wanted to fix the 4-chapter issue, and I wanted the chapters in order, so I started replacing old submissions with one-chapter submissions. Of course, now it looks almost like LotE is the only story I've ever written, though this is of course not the case.

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| Skip: LotE Part 1 |
| Skip: LotE Part 2 |
| Skip: LotE Part 3 |
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| LotE: Chapter 20 |
| LotE: Chapter 21 |
| LotE: Chapter 22 |
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| Skip: LotE Part 4 |
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Anyway, this is CURRENTLY chapter 21.
Things are picking up now; armies shall gather, survivors shall join paws, and heroes shall rise.

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Darklite
Heart 
May 8, 2011 at 12:27pm
All I can say is... Insyte most definitely deserves a few fangirls ;)
Great way to end an epic saga c:
Sparkleafexc
Heart 
May 8, 2011 at 4:09pm
Hehe, thanks for reading, Dark~ xD

yeah, he used to have a massive fanbase last summer~
Frosticoord
Heart 
July 22, 2010 at 1:49pm
This... This was just epic. If it weren't for the whole copyright issue with Pokemon, I would be insisting that you publish this.

So, just... Eep. <3
Sparkleafexc
Heart 
July 22, 2010 at 2:22pm
Lol yeah, stupid copyright issues xD
Thanks for reading~
Beedir
Heart 
July 22, 2010 at 1:48pm
INAPPROPRIATE. POKEMON KISSING? GROSS, SPARK. >:0
Lol, jk. xD I would be a hypocrite saying that, 'cause in an old RP, my character supported Bendy's character to kiss a Muk. xD Anyways~ YES, THIS IS COOL. <333 Talented writer, Mr. Spark~
Sparkleafexc
Heart 
July 22, 2010 at 7:48pm
Lol, thanks Bee :'D
Beedir
Heart 
July 22, 2010 at 7:49pm
Yeah, you is welcome. ;D <3
SkyWarriorcoord
Heart 
July 22, 2010 at 4:09pm
what RP was that? owo lol
Beedir
Heart 
July 22, 2010 at 4:50pm
A really, really old one where everyone's RPing skills were in the newb process. It was still in v3, and it was around summer '08. It was a Mystery Dungeon one Flare made. :3
SkyWarriorcoord
Heart 
July 22, 2010 at 5:48pm
Ah, wow, that is indeed old, lol xD maybe I'll read it sometime :0 hehe

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SkyWarriorcoord
Heart 
July 22, 2010 at 1:46pm
gah, your story was great ♥ and yes, LOVE LIVE KING INSYTE hehe c:
Sparkleafexc
Heart 
July 22, 2010 at 1:47pm
Lol xD
SkyWarriorcoord
Heart 
July 22, 2010 at 1:53pm
I MEANT LONG DANG YOU
Sparkleafexc
Heart 
July 22, 2010 at 1:55pm
Actually I didn't even notice that xD

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