Legend of the Exile, Chapter 1

Legend of the Exile, Chapter 1
Sparkleafexc June 13, 2010 at 12:04am
© Sparkleaf 2010-2021
This is the first part of my fanfic, Legend of the Exile. It used to be the submission for the full story, but given that the story's always changing, that's too impractical. Anyway, enjoy!

| LotE: Chapter 01 |
| Next: Chapter 02 |
| Skip: LotE Part 2 |
| Skip: LotE Part 3 |
| Skip: LotE Part 4 |

It is the year 2010 APT. Giratina the Exile, vengeful and malicious king of shadows, has declared war on humanity and brought ruin to the Sinnoh and Hoenn regions. As Giratina's armies of darkness slowly bring the world under his control, what little hope that remains in humanity withers and dies, decaying into despair. By death, destruction, bloodshed, and chaos, Giratina shall claim the earth for his own to elevate his power far beyond even that of Arceus himself. Meanwhile, on the summit of Mt. Pyre, five Pokemon grieve for their dead trainer, who was slain during the battle for Hoenn...
Under the Hoenn Elite Slick's influence, Sparktail the Raichu, Thalia the Leafeon, Insyte the Umbreon, and Rush the Swampert ascended their places in Pokemon fame. With the final spiritual gifts left to them by their trainer, can they survive, or will they fall to Giratina's malevolent wrath? Soon, the saga of the darkest times in the history of the Pokemon world will unfold...

Special Thanks:
Katadm - Creator of the awesome site where this story is hosted on, and where it first found fame.
SkyWarriorcoord - Very first reader/reviewer of War of Vengeance and Legend of the Exile.
Frosticoord - Created amazing artwork for various chapters over the years.
Lucecool - Helped with philosophical aspects and ideologies behind characters.
Xetajaadm - Identified grammar/spelling errors, plot inconsistencies, and ways on balancing Sparktail as a character.
Team Retrievers

Legalities: I do not claim any ownership to Pokemon, Nintendo, Game Freak, etc. This story is for non-profit, entertainment purposes only. I also claim no right to any game scripts which were used in the story. Original characters (c) Steven Loon, 2010; however, Pokemon, Leafeon, Raichu, and all non-original characters are (c) Nintendo, 1995-2010.
Warning: This story contains moderate levels of violence and mild language. Not recommended for children under age 10.

The prequel:


April 21, 2011 at 6:06pm
Gaaaaaaaaah! Chapter 26 be both freaky and epic!
December 15, 2010 at 5:34am
Wow... Okay, I've only read the first three chapters and some of WoV, but this is AMAZING!!! This is giving me so much inspiration that I'm off to write Legend Purge. >.>
December 15, 2010 at 3:12pm
Lol, thanks Icy~ :3
December 15, 2010 at 6:34pm
I doubt LP would become a Legend of the Exile, but I'll try. This is really something to look up to, and it'll be my gold standard. c:
August 28, 2010 at 2:38pm
Oh my freaking word Sparks! YOU JUST KILLED MY IPHONE!
August 28, 2010 at 4:01pm
Oops xD;;
August 29, 2010 at 6:15am
I tried to save it to my notes, but it was so long it almost KILLED the notes function! ;~;
August 12, 2010 at 3:59pm
*brain explodes* So big! D8
August 12, 2010 at 4:00pm
Yes, yes it is xD
August 2, 2010 at 1:03pm
August 1, 2010 at 6:51pm
I just skipped to the end. S|3
August 7, 2010 at 6:02pm
*gasps* y-you cheater D8
August 7, 2010 at 6:38pm
Yes, I am a cheater. >8D
June 13, 2010 at 7:40am
Wow, um, I'm off to read this now but - what issues did you have uploading?

Converting it to a suitable .txt? xD
June 13, 2010 at 6:41am
From the prologue, I can tell this is going to be an amazing story. =) Good job, and I'll get to finishing it sometime today/soon.
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